成果回饋與獎勵

英語自學點數競賽　評選標準

英語高手：3,000 元 (1名)
自學好手：2,000 元 (5名)
特別獎(點數累積500點): 5000元獎金

量：輔仁英語網路學院之自修室或臉書上的心得份數、計算自學點數。
質：自學筆記內容。

加權點數:非入門點數算為1.2點

得獎學生與點數

🌟英語高手 -- 獎金3,000元

陳思蓉 (呼治二) — 加權點:178.6點 ; 總點數:156點
(雲端討論室 38, 雲端寫作室 12, 自學筆記 26, Funpack 8
臉書留言 23, 桌遊列國 6, Quizizz 16, One Minute English 27)
(得獎原因：除加權點數高、且參與活動類別多元，值得嘉獎。)

🌟自學好手 -- 獎金1,000元

吳青泰 (宗教系博四) — 加權點:100.8點 ; 總點數:84點
(雲端討論室 84)

劉淑貞 (英文四) — 加權點:87.4點 ; 總點數:75點
(雲端討論室 62, Quizizz 11, One Minute English 2)

王幸銳 (會計二甲) — 加權點:81.6點 ; 總點數:73點
(自學筆記 32 , Funpack 6, 臉書留言 12, 中英翻譯自修課 8, Quizizz 13, One Minute English 2)

李采蓁 (營養四) — 加權點:76.4點 ; 總點數:68點
(雲端討論室 8, 自學筆記 12, Funpack 30, Quizizz 12, One Minute English 6)

🌟特別鼓勵獎

梁舜翔 (營養三) — 加權點:68點 ; 總點數:61點
(自學筆記 34, Quizizz 8, One Minute English 19)

劉淑桃 (英文二) — 加權點:67點 ; 總點數:57點
(雲端討論室 50, Quizizz 7)

陳亮吟 (西文二) — 加權點:66點 ; 總點數:60點
(雲端寫作室 16, 自學筆記 14, 臉書留言 5, Quizizz 15, One Minute English 10)

尤新艾 (營養三) — 加權點:63.6點 ; 總點數:54點
(雲端討論室 48, 臉書留言 2, Quizizz 4)

得獎學生

老師評語

獎項

平均分數

A Letter to Isabella

片長: 04:20

Excellent! Your group did a wonderful job in making the video well-organized and carefully,smoothly edited. Thanks so much for your wholeheartedly dedication to this video project. The only problem is that the way you present the writing scenes in the video can be discussed, because it takes a long period of time and it may make the audience feel monotonously bored. By speeding up the scenes, you guys actually figure it out to fix the problem. Clever!

第一名

獎金6,000元

89

A Letter to Stan Lee

片長: 04:19

Wonderfully made! Brilliantly researched. I like your video a lot and enjoy watching so much. Thanks a lot for your great efforts in making this successful video. Very good for all of you! Everything you did in the video all shows your profound understanding of Mr. Stan Lee and the video's editing work also demonstrates your consistency in style, structure and the letter content itself. A creatively presented video!

第二名

獎金3,000元

87.3

A Letter to Jw Anderson

片長: 04:37

The topic your group introduced here is very fresh and informative for me, so I really enjoy watching your letter video and listening to the BGM. Thanks a lot for your group's excellent work. Good job. The suggestions I'd give to your group are as follows: 1. Why using speech synthesis, the synthetic voice? Please do use your own narration instead of using this one. It creates confusion and inconsistency to your video; 2. The style of the video can also be discussed. There are many unexpected images popping up on the screen, an irrelevant detail which makes your contents less persuasive; 3. Please provide a job allocation list along with the references at the end of the video.

第三名

獎金1,000元

85.7

A Letter to John Galliano

片長: 06:00

I like your introduction to this talented fashion designer. The video is so interesting and informative. I really enjoy watching the video. Thanks so much for your wonderful teamwork to make all this happen. The video style presents the collage style, a way which Galliano himself prefers to break up the limited man-made objects and thoughts. It's brilliant! In the end of the video you also make a very solid work allocation list and the references. In doing so, the video itself is perfectly consistent and organized. The suggestions I'd give to your group are as follows: 1.Pronunciation. Please be very careful in pronouncing the words. There are so many words which are mispronounced; 2. Grammar. Please proofread the script very carefully even though the mistakes are minor ones.

佳作

85

Merci Beaucoup

片長: 04:15

Thanks for bringing us this lovely animation, dedicating your thankfulness to the teacher who influenced you a lot. It's a well-organized animation with a nicely structured narrative framework . It really impresses the audience. Good job. However, there is still something in the video that needs a little bit of rearrangement. 1. Pronunciation. For example, approproachable , effort, unlimited, ended, and etc. 2. Verb tense. Be careful of using past tense when describing your past experiences. 3. Use of verb. Please double check how the verb "reciprocate" is used in the sentence. 4. About the full understanding of the protagonist, you may talk a little bit more about this teacher. Overall, thanks a lot for your very hard work.

佳作

84

A Letter To a Fashion Designer Coco Chanel

片長: 04:07

The ways your group designs the video demonstrate your deep understanding of Chanel together with en excellent video structure. Good job. The visual effect is quite impressive, especially when the second speaker narrates Chanel's story. I thought you used a synthetic voice, but, of course, it's not. The second narrator did a good job. The suggestions I'd give to your group are as follows: 1. The opening can be discussed as you begin the video with the writing without properly giving a cover image for the video; 2. Grammar. Please be careful of the use of subjunctive mood and the passive of the verb "born." There is no such word as "borning!" Last, one of the thing(s) ... Don't forget the plural form of the last noun; 3. Please provide a work allocation list and references in the end of the video. All in all, thanks so much for your excellent teamwork.

佳作

83

得獎學生

老師評語

獎項

平均分數

林子玲(應美三)/游博勝(西文三)
陳絢忻(日文三)/蘇瑞怡(法文三)

Random Attack in Pingtung

片長: 03:58

The acting part at the beginning attracts viewers' attention. And the panel discussion is done in a professional fashion as the panelists provide resourceful information with advanced vocabulary from medical and legal perspectives.

第一名

獎金6,000元

90

Having An Interesting Job Cuts The Risk of Dementia

片長: 04:58

Interesting and lively presentation of topic. Good organization of content. Team members use personal experience to highlight the importance of "Prevention is better than cure".

第二名

獎金3,000

86.5

李宛育(金企一乙)/林資螢(企管一丙)
黃菀彤(企管一丙)/黃鈺音(企管一丙)
羊子彤(企管一丙)

Deepfake Technology

片長: 04:37

An impressive animation work. The BGM is also suitable. The content is easy-to-understand and yet informative. All of the narrators' pronunciation and delivery are done wonderfully.

第三名

獎金

1,000元

86

林曉青(日文三)/李昱醇(日文三)
蔡宥溱(日文三)/黃品臻(日文三)
蔡旻諺(日文三)

The Issue about Artificial Intelligence

片長: 05:17

The reflection part is done pretty nicely in terms of content and delivery. But the summary part can be improved by paraphrasing the news a little bit so as to introduce more naturally next time and sound more natural.

佳作

84

曹雨涵(財法四)/陳俐蓉(化學三)
沈郁芳(中文三)/陳佳妮(中文三)

Smuggled Animals

片長: 04:27

Good simulation of new broadcast. Topic touches upon news that people care about. Delivery is natural and acting is good.

佳作

84

得獎學生

老師評語

獎項

平均分數

洪詩涵(呼治一)/邱彙娟(呼治一)
陳方郁(職治一)/梁凱雯(職治一)

The Plight of Kosovo Refugees

片長: 08:46

Detailed analysis of the photo. The fonts of the subtitles can be changed so that the subtitles don't spoil the contents of the presentation.

第一名

獎金
6,000元

92

陳品樺(職治一)/李宜蓁(職治一)
陳忻妮(職治一)/余佳盈(職治一)

A Deep Insight Into David

片長: 08:54

The content is good, and well-structured. Some points are taken because the style of subtitles differs among speakers; also some speaker's image circles block the image on the slides.

第二名

獎金
3,000元

90.3

趙偉俊(金企一乙)/林耀怡(企管一甲)
歐若亞(金企一甲)/林佳蓁(金企一甲)

The M-shaped Society

片長: 07:31

It's good to have pictures in the slides but these pictures should help the audience to understand the points in the presentation. The syle of the slides should be consistent . There are subtitles in some parts of the presentation, not all of the presentation.

佳作

85

劉宥君(經濟三)/蘇緯(英文三)
黃瀅珊(經濟三)/林宣妗(藝創學程四)

The Evolution of Asian Images in Western Movies

片長: 12:50

Slides are clear. It's good to point out the reasons of the image change. It would be better to explain how the IMDb rating is related to the discussion of image transformation.

佳作

85

林毓珊(職治一)/李湘雋(職治一)
張百葳(呼治一)/鄧宜薰(呼治一)

Missing forest guardian: pangolin

片長: 5:56

There are some grammatical mistakes and language problems. When you decided to show your face, you need to be careful with your posture, eye-contact, and facial expression.You are quite fluent, but there are still some pronunciation problems.

佳作

84.3

蘇柔綺(應美二)/林偉翔(應美二)
吳怡安(應美二)/林沛辰(應美二)
胡秀涓(應美二)

How UI and UX of Music Streaming Platforms Influence People?

片長: 10:51

In the beginning, you stay on one slide for too long; your audience expects more in a video presentation. Moreover, you don’t have a signal (like an arrow or pointer) to guide your audience when your put so many details on each slide. Around the middle, you sped up and it’s too much information for your audience to digest. One of the presenters is quite fluent. The whole team should learn from her and work together to improve the way you read your script. You must have consulted some reference.

佳作

82